film magazine evaluation

During our lesson i had a look at a film poster and a film magazine that other students had produced. i looked at these as it gave me an idea of what was expected from my poster and magazine cover. when i looked at these products i evaluated them and picked out all of the things that had ben done well and then the things that could be improved. The first one that i looked at the was film magazine shown below. This was graded at a high level 3. This was because they had used the correct conventions of a magazine for the page layout, used a variety of different font and text sizes, has a good use of IT and ha good integration of illustration and text. The reason that this didn't get top band was due to only a few minor issues. for example the bar code was places in the wrong position and on the wrong side of the magazine. The title of the magazine also needs to be a bit bigger and a different font as it doesn't look as realistic as the real magazine title.